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Bruce Lee

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My second attempt at realistic drawing, and first attempt at Bruce Lee.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Well this is a lovely you have created.<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/m/s…" alt=":iconsmilieplz:" title="smilieplz"/> The critique will be set up into PROS, CONS, and OVERALL REVIEW of the picture. I am very happy to be critiquing this awesome piece of art~.<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/y/a/y…" alt=":iconyayitaliaplz:" title="yayitaliaplz"/>
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PROS:
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BRUCE LEE: You did a great job on capturing the martial artistic tone that Lee could create. I know where this stance is from you nailed how the body was formed to show his concentration and alertness.
The hair looks pretty good. I see you took time to draw those little slivers to show natural hair follicles at his forehead and the side of his face, instead of make big chunks of bangs with no individual loose hairs.
TECHNIQUE: The shading is nicely done on some areas, like the nose. It really shows a 3-dimensional look. Also with the muscles. They show that looks of being glossy and sweaty from fighting very nice. The idea to leave that white around the contours of Lee's body was a great move. This shows a feeling of power and a shining aura from this martial arts master against the darker background(assuming it is a wall).
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CONS:
BRUCE LEE<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)"/>Anatomy)Some anatomy mistakes are on the hands. But I will say drawing hands are one of the hardest, or maybe the hardest parts of a human to draw,so I will not go further on it. His eyes don't look too bad,but the right one doesn't really follow the left's natural curve flow. To help make the eyes looks more 3-dimensional add a small thin and light shaded line for shaded. I am not sure how to describe where to put them,but I like to use a diagram to help me out. The hair I would have liked to see a little more lighting against it, to give it that shine that the skin had from sweat. This would have helped it to look more natural. His eyes brows need to be a bit darker and longer, other than that their shape is pretty good.
TECHNIQUE: Some of shadow areas should be a bit darker to show a deeper shadow from the rest of him.
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OVERALL REVIEW:
You did a nice job on this piece. It really shows your artistic abilities. Though you have very minor errors.
VISION: 4 STARS
ORIGINALITY: 4 STARS
TECHNIQUE: 4 STARS
IMPACT: 5 STARS